Comic 44 - Page 42

24th Jun 2020, 12:00 AM in Chapter 3: Make A Mess
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sam 24th Jun 2020, 12:10 AM edit delete reply
#1 son... epic. also FUCK CLOSET TIME
skel-loo 25th Jul 2020, 5:13 PM edit delete reply
I heard about this comic from a friend, and I'm excited to see where it goes! one suggestion- have you considered applying different text colors for different characters' dialogue? especially on this page and the last page, it's a struggle to tell who is speaking what. other than that I hope you are having fun with this!
theartsycanary 26th Jul 2020, 10:20 PM edit delete reply
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Howdy! thank you for commenting! (it's pretty awesome to think that people are actually talking about something I've made lol) I have thought about it as a matter of fact, and have opted not to for a couple different reasons, not the least of which being that color associations are a little bit difficult with this series because colors are in-fiction important (if we gave each character a color, half of them would have to be purple, lol, and stuff like different shades and stuff is pretty important to the plot as well so it would be difficult to vary up.) so yeah, no colored dialogue, but thanks for the note! now that it's been drawn to my attention that it's hard to tell who's talking,I'll put more effort into stuff like panel layouts and word bubble spacing to try and make it more clear in the future.
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